The Challenge: Write a character to whom you would be attracted.
Charlie
By Jenny Holden
The morning was all downy soft, light tumbling in pastels
through the mottled green of summer leaves.
Charlie sat on the porch of a small white cottage with a coffee balanced
on one knee and a book on the other. The
water-colored dawn slipped down his aquiline nose like quicksilver.
A glimpse of smile curled his full lips and vanished nearly
as quickly, almost as if he was afraid of giving it away for free. He reached up slowly, removed his worn
reading glasses, and rubbed his eyes. Heavily lashed lids began to droop slowly
over pale green, thought overtaking him.
Last night had been a wonderfully
uncommon occurrence and his body was still reeling from its effects. Drinking with friends after an impromptu jam session happened rarely, which made it all the more special. Charlie, reminiscing, eyed the banjo sitting comfortably in its stand just beyond the threshold.
Thick black hair stood in anarchic locks this way and that, a stark contrast to his methodical face. He still hadn’t brushed it and probably wouldn’t for the rest of this lazy Sunday. He thumbed to the back flap of the book, pulled out the receipt of its purchase, and used it as a makeshift bookmark. A slight grimace painted his marble visage as he downed the rest of the acrid coffee.
Thick black hair stood in anarchic locks this way and that, a stark contrast to his methodical face. He still hadn’t brushed it and probably wouldn’t for the rest of this lazy Sunday. He thumbed to the back flap of the book, pulled out the receipt of its purchase, and used it as a makeshift bookmark. A slight grimace painted his marble visage as he downed the rest of the acrid coffee.
He stood, stretching his 6 foot frame toward the pink and
gray clouds scuttling by. He was broad
chested, but fairly slim for his build. He accredited his physique to his love
of the ocean. Every morning he would take
his dog, Hank, out for a run along the coast of his beloved Massachusetts home
and the occasional swim if the weather was agreeable. This morning, the sky boasted of boundless sun and congenial temperatures, so Charlie sauntered back
into his modest abode with a sense of adventure. A stroll down the beach with a sandy-blond companion would be a most satisifactory start to a day like this.
Clothes from the previous night were pooled near the door
of his bedroom, Charlie having been too tired to bother with sorting, folding,
and hanging. He set his cup and book on
the bare tile counter of the kitchen and bent down to collect the debris when
Hank bounded off the bed and into Charlie’s arms. The force of canine adoration sent the two
sprawling onto the hardwood floor.
Charlie let out a booming laugh and wrapped his arms around the wriggling
golden retriever. Hank licked every inch
within reach.
After a few moments, Charlie released his willing captive
and rolled to his feet. He ambled into
his bedroom, not before he gathered his clothing once again and deposited the lot
into his hamper. He didn’t own
much. In fact, he owned less now than he
had in his entire life. After an
incredibly difficult span of five years, Charlie had given away virtually his
entire estate to lead a simpler life. He
moved to a simple town, bought a simple house, and started writing a simple
book. He was simply and incredibly
happy.
Well damn Jenny. This is lovely. I didn't think about how telling the location would be. I like that there are parts of you reflected in this man.
ReplyDeleteTell your banjo-playing, glasses-wearing story man that he has to move out, cause I want his pretty house please.
ReplyDeleteThe beach and sky too. Those are also mine.
DeleteVery pretty, and though (after reading your previous works) one can't help but wonder if you're conning me with this, still the bits of longing for warmth, for open-heartedness and for simplicity in Life are very endearing.
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